I think a slightly softer line 'outlining' the face would work better against all that white paper.
But I love the eyes. It's either under the blanket waiting for its owner to come home......or it's been caught there and she's looking very sheepish! 😇
It wasn’t until I posted this that it looks like her head is floating in space. Ha.
I’m working on the fish next. It’s a third done.
The use of pencil works really well SonIa. I also like the composition. Less is more here.